Waiting for your lips to weave words
Don’t keep this silence for long
My heart is trembling
Tears are filling my eyes
Feel like somebody pierced my heart
Why can’t you talk?
World become stand still
Eyes lost its colors
Everything is turning in to shadows
I am drowning in this silence
You know that
I can’t stay away from you voice
Don’t go away
Don’t close your lips
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Hey! just thought of adding something more to ur creation....
Past echoed and the future
refrained to glue..But I waited
and waited patiently For you...
The longing drowned soon
and I knew
the real true
that you are gone
that I am...
...left alone
But, together with this truth
there goes something more
in queue.
That once
I had waited and
waited patiently
for you.
nice fims...it's good
Dear Anonymous
Thanks for your comment. I really liked the way you gave a conclusion to the poem ,if you don't mind I would like to know you
Fimson
hi... Sorry to come here but thought of adding some more words to the anonymous post who gave before to me...
Waiting ....
yes me too waiting patiently
the day will come
to become together
I blame/belive god
That he know me
That he will make you know too of me..
waiting
waiting patiently...
almost i am becoming patient
you are my doctor...
I still remain crazy
waiting...
my waiting never ends
until it reaches the dooms...
you know me ....
try to save me ...
waiting
waiting patiently ...
for your help hand
I can’t stay away from you
Don’t go away
Don’t close my life...
Hi Anonymous 2nd :-)
Its very symbolic creation and very good too..Waiting in the lonely night is beautiful ;but the fate of our life should be in our hand not in the persons hand whom you are waiting for..drop me a mail if you like to talk
fimson@gmail.com
Fimson
Fimson
When time come i will write a mail or talk. You are right our life should be in our hand, but it become late for me i have already given my life to the person Whome am waiting for....
and the same person Knows it too. That is what is my fate ...
Regards
Why we always end up waiting when we know the one for whom we wait will never come back..why cant we move on when we know things are ephemeral..they dont last forever?
Anonymous 1st...
True Love is not a cup of coffee that you share once and with it it ends... It happens without your knowledge when you even does not want and once it happen you die with it not that you will keep rolling it with people. For people who takes it so light may be just a small feeling, for those who has it at heart it is the life .... You may not know it, if you truly love with full heart you will know it....
You go on in search of love kicking the one in your hand. The gross on the otherside is always green but when you go there you will see what is real.... I bet you have seen it till now so many time. It was my sin/fate i have lost my life... God is great he never took away your life when i am alive let him bless you with goodness...
I will wait at the dark with my lost life... I will wait as a dead body... I will wait for you... for ever... ever until my death....
Hi Anonymous
You are right love is not just a thing that can be forgotten in the course of time. It’s something that gave you wings to fly, to dream and hope, you defined your horizons by the colors of love. You knew each day is new, started hearing and listening the things that were never part of your life. But suddenly you felt the reality , that the wings you were thought is yours has taken away from you ,the light you aimed to walk has closed its eyes but it doesn't done anything to the rhythm of your love.When you were in love you were understanding yourself ,understanding the extremities you can go for your love. People are just a medium to know and feel its depth . Hold your love fully try to understand its turbulence and soon or later you will find Love never gone from you and it never dependent on any person ,and no more you will stay in darkness Coz love was always yours and it remains with you.
Fimson
Right comment Fimson....
reading the fimson words of rhyme
weaving through narrow passages of time
feeling of cold, dark, and damp
life lines tracking through the abyss
Hi there
Nice one :-) , It doesn't mean obscurity is going to be there forever .. light is still in reach...
Fimson
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